From time to time, I've been asked about a Malêverse ebook. In general, I don't think that timelines are easily convertible into novels - the goals of storytelling and historical plausibility are often in conflict, and the usual mix of "academic articles" and narrative vignettes doesn't really fit the novel format. Sobel probably came closest to pulling it off, but "For Want of a Nail" took the form of a single history book rather than a scrapbook of articles and vignettes, and it told a coherent, linear story of two countries rather than trying to be a history of the world.
As Malê Rising drew to a close, though, it occurred to me that parts of it might lend themselves to the ebook format. These were the founding of the First Sokoto Republic (i.e., the timeline from 1840 to 1854), the American Civil War, the Great War, and the Indian War of Independence. Of those, I'm most partial to the Great War, which is (a) already novel-length, (b) told primarily through narratives, and (c) broad enough in scope to be of interest to general audiences while still keeping Africa center-stage and including extensive Asian and Latin American content. On the other hand, there are enough characters to make Harry Turtledove cry, and there's a lot of backstory that would have to be introduced somehow in order for the narrative to make sense.
After some thought, I believe I've figured out a solution. My editing process for the novel - which would be called "Partners in the Dance," a title which I'm grateful to azander12 for suggesting - would be as follows:What I'm still ambivalent about is that, while the 1893-97 vignettes span the period of the Great War and take place against its backdrop, many of them aren't actually about the war - they're more about the social changes and political events going on behind the scenes. Many of the big battles and campaigns take place offstage and are discussed only in the academic updates. I'm not sure that a "Great War novel" that omits so many details of the war would be attractive to general audiences. Should I include more grunt's-eye-view and/or general's-eye-view vignettes (which honestly aren't what I'm interested in writing), or is there already enough for a Great War theme not to be misleading?
I'd be very interested in hearing everyone's thoughts and suggestions. Fair warning, though: it's by no means guaranteed that I'll do this, and if I do, the finished product is probably months or a year away. I've got a Mutanda story that I'd like to finish before the end of this year, and other projects that I'd like to work on in the near future, so this will be something I do catch-as-catch-can. But if there's interest in this, I'd like to open it for discussion.
As Malê Rising drew to a close, though, it occurred to me that parts of it might lend themselves to the ebook format. These were the founding of the First Sokoto Republic (i.e., the timeline from 1840 to 1854), the American Civil War, the Great War, and the Indian War of Independence. Of those, I'm most partial to the Great War, which is (a) already novel-length, (b) told primarily through narratives, and (c) broad enough in scope to be of interest to general audiences while still keeping Africa center-stage and including extensive Asian and Latin American content. On the other hand, there are enough characters to make Harry Turtledove cry, and there's a lot of backstory that would have to be introduced somehow in order for the narrative to make sense.
After some thought, I believe I've figured out a solution. My editing process for the novel - which would be called "Partners in the Dance," a title which I'm grateful to azander12 for suggesting - would be as follows:
1. Introduce the backstory through four chapters that lay out the prewar lives of main viewpoint characters. The first would include all of Paulo and Usman Abacar's narrative updates through 1892, edited to weave in a bit more of Abacar's political theology and background events. The second would be an expanded Souleymane/Omar arc starting with the former's enlistment in the tirailleurs at age 15 (or maybe even enlistment as a drummer boy at age 11). The third would involve Kipling or Stanley (I'm leaning heavily toward the former); the fourth Weisz or another officer on the FAR side.
2. There's some missing space in the first year of the war, because I hadn't yet got into the rhythm of one narrative per month. I can use this space to introduce Ibrahim, add a couple of narratives featuring Kipling in the Southeast Asian theater (among other things, he'll meet Ibrahim and Sarah), and show Weisz in the early days of the war before he's captured. I might also be able to get more political background in this way.
3. I'll consolidate characters, taking away as many of the one-offs as possible and giving those scenes to continuing characters. The big four will still appear in only a minority of scenes, and I'll keep secondary recurring characters like Merjema in Sarajevo, but as many characters as possible will appear more than once.
4. I'll include and possibly expand the postwar updates through 1899, finishing with Omar going away sailing, Usman being elected to Parliament, Weisz finding a home in Buganda and Kipling going into temporary retirement while he thinks things over.
5. The academic updates can survive as endpapers for each year of the war - they're short enough in relation to the story that they shouldn't be too jarring. Well, hopefully they shouldn't.
2. There's some missing space in the first year of the war, because I hadn't yet got into the rhythm of one narrative per month. I can use this space to introduce Ibrahim, add a couple of narratives featuring Kipling in the Southeast Asian theater (among other things, he'll meet Ibrahim and Sarah), and show Weisz in the early days of the war before he's captured. I might also be able to get more political background in this way.
3. I'll consolidate characters, taking away as many of the one-offs as possible and giving those scenes to continuing characters. The big four will still appear in only a minority of scenes, and I'll keep secondary recurring characters like Merjema in Sarajevo, but as many characters as possible will appear more than once.
4. I'll include and possibly expand the postwar updates through 1899, finishing with Omar going away sailing, Usman being elected to Parliament, Weisz finding a home in Buganda and Kipling going into temporary retirement while he thinks things over.
5. The academic updates can survive as endpapers for each year of the war - they're short enough in relation to the story that they shouldn't be too jarring. Well, hopefully they shouldn't.
I'd be very interested in hearing everyone's thoughts and suggestions. Fair warning, though: it's by no means guaranteed that I'll do this, and if I do, the finished product is probably months or a year away. I've got a Mutanda story that I'd like to finish before the end of this year, and other projects that I'd like to work on in the near future, so this will be something I do catch-as-catch-can. But if there's interest in this, I'd like to open it for discussion.